When writing an essay
at the beginning of each paragraph
move the first line in
about 5 spaces.
This will help the reader
know a new idea
has been introduced
in the story.
> Growing up in Ohio led
me to be the person that I am today. I lived with my mother,
father and older brother. We had a chow and once in a while fish,
rabbits and ducks for pets.
> Our home had a big yard. In fact it was so big
that my dad made a small nine hole golf course around the yard.
Our family and friends would come over and play golf with us.
Once my friend came over and stood
too close while I was swinging the club. It hit her just above
the eye! I was so upset! I could have put her eye
out. She had a golf ball size knot on her head for over a week
and had to miss school.